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BW VS Color - VENGEANCENIGMA

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V.E.N.G.E.A.N.C.E.N.I.G.M.A.
my entry for =Tajii-chan's contest B/W VS Color

This story started from Dana's Revenge...
One day born the twins named Perdaniza Enigma and Danapette Negativa. Unfortunately Dana and Daniza born unperfect, their body stick together.
Then doctor recommends their mother to do a separation surgery so Dana and Daniza can live normally, but couple months after the surgery Dana's condition is getting worse and worse until finally she died.
Thirteen years after Dana's dead, Preston, her boyfriend, give her an article about Indigo Humans. Because her huge curiosity, Daniza asks Preston to check her aura. Daniza was surprised when knowing that she was one of them. So she able to communicate with the other world. On the Friday 13 (the day of Dana's death) Daniza accidentally meet Dana before she had a breakfast. Dana terrors her with some creepy, perilous things.


The most dominant between them is...
Dana the B/W, she's Daniza's twin who pronounced as Daniza's shadow. Dana always want to have a revenge with Daniza, kill her, and uses Daniza's body to live. So people will think that's Daniza's image has changed, but actually that's Dana with Daniza's body

So, who do you think will win this vengeance war?
I think Daniza will beat Dana because Preston is an aura healer. He hypnotized Daniza and suggest her to make an apologize to Dana and let her forget its sudden death
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Aww~ This is really cute~! >w<

I read through the story~ And I really like it owo Even though it's something of a prelude, it sounds very interesting! ^_^ Do you plan on writing it~? Because it sounds very interesting ^w^ Sort of like a 'revenge' plot.. I love the twist in it ;3 It sounds very awesome! ^_^ And I like the way you drew the two twins, they're so cute! <3

I really like how you portrayed the color schemes through your characters~ I can really see the representation behind the color schemes with them ^-^ And you used their expressions to even express their personalities further! ^o^ I love their clothing~ and their posing as well! ^-^ Your style is very cute~~ both of your OCs look great! ^_^ And also~ I like the simple backgrounds on either side~ They look awesome as well~! ^o^

Thanks for entering and good luck~! :heart: